Joy Division - Disorder

THE BRIEF: A promotion package for the release of an album, to include a music promo video, together with two of the following options:
1. a cover for its release as part of a digipak (CD/DVD package);
2. a magazine advertisement for the digipak (CD/DVD package).

For the maximum viewing of all of the videos, please watch at the highest resolution available. Thank you

Director - Jonny Hughes (JH)
Cinematographer - Callum Moreman (CM)
Director of Photography/Cast Member - Joel Colborne (JC)

Saturday, 19 March 2011

Rough Cut 5

This is the final rough cut of our music video. With just a few changes left to make, the video is nearly complete. After making the necessary changes after the last audience feedback session, the below video was the outcome.




AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
- The 8mm footage works very well now. Perhaps try swap the Malham 8mm footage with the previous shot from that section.
- As mentioned before, just look for little opportunities to cut the video to the beat or lyrics. For example bringing in the woods section when the vocals come in.
- Look at the transitions again, use more cross fade dissolves to allow the cold turkey scene to bleed into the other locations.
- Try slow-mo the shot of the protagonist falling to his knees.
- The cold turkey scenes work much better now they are less frantic. Overlay now works well.
- At 1.32 there is a echoing sound. Switch the following shot to sync with this sound.
- As the character climbs at 2.36 he grins. Though this was intentional to signify a sense of relief, the preferred reading was no followed so to avoid confusion, cut this slight grin out.

Following this advice, we are now ready to create our final cut of the video

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